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Do you Remember Now? by ~Slushien:iconSlushien:


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EDIT:
Woah, I added some quality. STAND BACK PEOPLE
If some of you view this later or something, I've changed the gravestones. XD Added shading and all. Maybe I've overdone it. D; It took me another half hour. >D

Completely lost what category this is meant to go in.

Fuck. This took me ages.
Ages.
*sighs*
I mean, I'm proud of it, but it wasn't how I expected it to turn out. I hoped the colours would be a little darker, maybe a bit more detail and stuff yet still staying in MS Paint. I did this all with the Touch Pad on the laptop. Not even a mouse, no Tablet, anything. Just the stupid little Censor Pad.

So I want your honest opinion and criticism for this. Criticism encouraged. Though make in contructive, not just 'the hand looks broken' or something: a way to improve it. You get what I mean. This took me so long, you don't want me to get overly disappointed, now, do you? ^__^

This is my OC, Slush Kamuri. And I was meant to put in the blue streaks, but I was afraid I'd ruin the hair which I'm happy with for now.

Do you think it could do with shadows? Or shading on the gravestones or anything? Or even words. I don't know. But tell me what you think. :3

The sky at the back: I'm not sure if you could possibly see sky that way (I mean, behind a hill in a graveyard rather then just seeing grass carrying on or rock or something). I wanted it to be blue, but maybe red suit it more.
It would have also been better if you could see that rope hanging from the tree against the sky. But too late now? *shrugs*
Yeah, that fence. XD It probably looks really off too. Especially near the left. I started on the right, copy and pasted. This was before I coloured it all, so you might see the sky overlapping it or whatever. I tried to make as few obvious mistakes as possible, but again, you see any please tell me. ^__^

The title's from 'Remember Me' by Hoobastank. The beginning reminds me of Kimimaro. Or a graveyard. And that's where I got the idea from, so I felt it right to steal a couple of words from the song when I was lacking creativity nearing the end. x3 I've just been listening to 'Downfall' by Trust Company and that song the whole time drawing it, and I know the words (obviously) now. XD I'll be dreaming about this song tomorrow.

My back. Hurts. So bad. I've just been lying in an awkward position on the sofa. LAZZYY. But the thing is we've got a school tornament for hockey tomorrow then county and you've heard it all beforeeeeee... and there's nothing better to do, seeing as all my friends have gone shopping or something lame like that. D: < I feel lonely.

Lyrics (c) Hoobastank
Character (c) me
Art (c) me
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~phenixkatasan92:iconphenixkatasan92: Jan 12, 2008, 12:39:10 PM
It looks like it took a long time! Pixel art is like, one of the hardest things I can think of! -applauds you and pats you on the back with a hug for a job well done- The background is amazing, and it's just all so good! Especially with a touch pad! My word! That's hard! I hate touch pads! XD The only thing that I can say that it would need is a bit more shading. ^_^ Other than that it looks awesome!!!8!!!!!taters!!!!!!!!2

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Me: It's okay, Ba! If you get scared just run to the nearest police station!

Ba: But I have no clue where the police station is!

Me: Then run to the nearest fire station! You can't miss those big red fire trucks! They're yellow!
~x--Germany:iconx--Germany: Jan 12, 2008, 4:25:12 PM
Nice Slush. :3
I admire your touchpad skills.

You missed some lime green at the top, near the bottom of the fence. And on the left of the fence itself, about third-ish from the end, one joining line (the top one) is too dark. If you get what I mean.

The grass looks like an ocean, it's an awesome effect. <3

The body looks a bit too skinny, but that's okay.

The gravestones need writing and possibly shading. They just look so blank at the moment.

Other than that, amazing job. <333

:glomp:

Sorry I left when we were chatting. My phone decided to DIE. D:
~Slushien:iconSlushien: Jan 13, 2008, 11:35:49 AM
:3 Yay.

Yeah, it's edited now. I swear I saw that green one. I must have forgotten... n.n Thanks for noticing.

XD Ocean grass. Except it's a bit weird how it goes darkest to darker to dark to lighter to dark again. o_x

Excuse me while I sort out my habit for overstretched torsos. D: *turns around and rams food down her throat*
Do you think I overdid it with the shading?

>3 And thanks for the :+fav:. ^_____^

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~Slushien:iconSlushien: Jan 13, 2008, 11:41:58 AM
<3 Thank you very much~
:glomp: The shading I did on the gravestone took almost as much as drawing the actual person. D:
I'm pretty much used to drawing with a touch pad now, though. XD I can use my left hand rather then right when using a mouse, and I spend more time on the laptop then the normal computer, so I can control it well enough. Still, I'm not the best. .-.
Do you think I should do shading on her top, too? Like, not the shading that's there at the moment, but instead the creases and folds and stuff.
D8 TATERS

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~TheGreatKat:iconTheGreatKat: Jan 13, 2008, 4:53:33 PM
Wow Slush, I really like this! I'm going to fave it! <3

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~Slushien:iconSlushien: Jan 14, 2008, 11:40:29 AM
Yaaaaay. Thanks ;D

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~TheGreatKat:iconTheGreatKat: Jan 14, 2008, 4:49:05 PM
=3 No prob! I think you can draw people awsome! ^^

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~HighQueenChey:iconHighQueenChey: Jan 14, 2008, 6:16:37 PM
I likies it very muchly! I would fave it but my faves are getting REALLY full! D: And I'm too in love with the piccie-itures to remove any!! xD Much luffs, though! ^^

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~Slushien:iconSlushien: Jan 15, 2008, 9:48:25 AM
XD What's the limit for faves, anyway?
Thanks. :3

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